Month: August 2022

My Adventure are the pits writing

KIA ORA its the one and only iDA and here is my writing

Kia Ora its the one and only Ida.

this is my dialog writing for Adventure are the pits

‘AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!’ the boy shouted ‘I’m going to die!!!’ he gasped for air as he whizzed down the slide. When he got to the bottom of the slide he said ‘that was actually fun!!!’

what would you do for the dialog???

Mr Lemoncellos library.

KIA ORA its the one and only iDA from room 23

I think that Rose Vermette decided not to stay because she made a commitment to her soccer team

and co she got a computer because of that commitment.

And I think Kayla Carlson left because she thought that it was going to be boring

and she did not want to do it.

I think I would of stayed because it would be fun.

Would you go???

My adventure are the pits

KIA ORA it is the one and ONLY iDA

here is the work I’m most proud of because it has a lot of good onomatopoeia like ‘Creak, whoosh, zap, and splash.’ onomatopoeia are words that describe sounds.

Creak the slide muttered as the boy gripped the bar his heart was beating so hard but he couldn’t go back down whoosh, zap the boy splashed into the ball pit.

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