My adventure are the pits

KIA ORA it is the one and ONLY iDA

here is the work I’m most proud of because it has a lot of good onomatopoeia like ‘Creak, whoosh, zap, and splash.’ onomatopoeia are words that describe sounds.

Creak the slide muttered as the boy gripped the bar his heart was beating so hard but he couldn’t go back down whoosh, zap the boy splashed into the ball pit.

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2 thoughts on “My adventure are the pits

  1. kia ora Ida. that’s a great sentence I love how you wrote he splashed into the ball pit. blog ya later. Millie

    1. KIA ORA Millie. Thanks for your comment. A challenge that I faced when completing this is thinking of onomatopoeia blog you later

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